Hi Mike,I am concerned that you have included too much personal detail here. I would remove all your contact details immediately. All the best for 2008,regards, Mike J
Hi Mike this is well laid out and well presented. Perhaps a little brief, may be good to include a personal achievement and more personal skills. The degree title should start with capitals.Cheers Gill (Ya tutor!)
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Hi Mike,
I am concerned that you have included too much personal detail here. I would remove all your contact details immediately. All the best for 2008,
regards, Mike J
Hi Mike this is well laid out and well presented. Perhaps a little brief, may be good to include a personal achievement and more personal skills. The degree title should start with capitals.
Cheers Gill (Ya tutor!)
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